My first hub build...what do u think?

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Thanks Lethal , I think that your build is a bit plane and could be a lot better! What type of theme was this suppose to be related towards? The walls have no detail, even a little more detail would make this build a bit better! The blocks you picked do NOT go with each other!
 
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The issue here is the shape you've done. It looks like a 2 minute job with some worldedit. If you chose a less cylindrical shape, then it'll look nicer.
Vines made this look worse.
Good things:
- Portal shaping works well.
- Pixel art is accurate compared to others.
Things to improve on:
- Shape of overall construction.
- Block choice.
 
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I didn't use world edit, yet i can see how someone can with the shape. I will work on the things you told me to work on.
 

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The issue here is the shape you've done. It looks like a 2 minute job with some worldedit. If you chose a less cylindrical shape, then it'll look nicer.
Vines made this look worse.
Good things:
- Portal shaping works well.
- Pixel art is accurate compared to others.
Things to improve on:
- Shape of overall construction.
- Block choice.
Copier ;), I agree also. You almost copied my format I used to do on builds to tell if good or not.
 
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Don't use sapling trees, make your own, place wood in a straight line, the build off from that, then add leafs, trust me, end result isn't too bad.
 
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