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Requesting Looking for opinions/critique on my edit

Discussion in 'Videography & Trailers' started by EclipseCinematics, Nov 9, 2019.

  1. EclipseCinematics

    EclipseCinematics Member

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    Hi all,

    Today om looking for some critique on one my videos on climate change.

    The areas I'm looking on critique are the storyline, Editorial concept, Colour grading and audio editing.

    Link to the video Here
     
  2. Leap Discord

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    Hey there! You should come check out our Discord server. We have a #feedback channel where you can ask for feedback on your work https://discord.gg/s5fS8Sv
     
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    EclipseCinematics

    EclipseCinematics Member

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    Thank you, although I'd like to have some critique here
     
  4. Lucian929

    Lucian929 Owner @ play.fallenskies.net Premium

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    Great video. Only recommendation: Change "Deforistation" to "Deforestation" at the beginning of the video.
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    1 other small issue: I thought it was a little weird when I saw the lightning, seemed to just be there, and for no reason. I wouldn't say lightning has to do with climate change etc, maybe im wrong.
     
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    EclipseCinematics

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    Thanks a lot, your critique means a lot. Ill fix that ASAP
     
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